Im My Mind

Sunday, April 15, 2012

Story Telling...


9:42PM 18th Feb 2012

She:
hello again J
Chitaranjan:
hey... hi
seems quite busy day..
She:
yah!
but finishing off pending wrks J..
jst reached
delhi is full of traffic ...
Chitaranjan:
yeah..i knw
u stay in delhi or noida?
She:
rikshaw b beech sadak pe chalte hai..
horn maarte raho bande bhi gaadiyo k aage i chalte hai at some places :P ..
Chitaranjan:
J thy make ur life challenging; even on roads..
She:
yes J
WEST delhi..
Chitaranjan:
ok
i used to stay in RK Puram
waise i enjoyed delhi lyf..
She:
waise toh i also love this place
i love the BHEED actually. J
but its good to cribble also K ..
Chitaranjan:
hmm.. so u happy ;-)
look at me ... not at all
often i feel like helpless.. screaming ...shouting.. L
She:
SHOUT
m listening ;-)..
yes ...jor se ..
Chitaranjan:
to vent out frustrations..
She:
do it J
Chitaranjan:
baas ! rehne do
u hv come frm tht bheed bhad
no more ...
She:
nahi wo bheed to muje sunti hi ni
m lost...
Chitaranjan:
hehehe
She:
wht about dinner?
Chitaranjan:
hmm ..don't knw..
habbit of skipping L
She:
thts not gud to get used to such things..
Chitaranjan:
don’t knw gud or bad..
She:
At least i dnt feel that one shud b..
Chitaranjan:
agree .. but no choice
She:
v make choices..
Chitaranjan:
anyways let me make some arrangements
wait..
She:
thats gud..
np..


AFTER 10 Minutes…


Chitaranjan:
yes, had something J
happy?
She:
yup
now, u complete ur turn
then i'll tell u something to support my comment
Chitaranjan:
my turn?..
She:
yeah in our last chat i told u few of my incidents
its ur turn now..
Chitaranjan:
oh i see..
She:
n i dnt mind if urs are not as interesting as mine ;-)..
Chitaranjan:
let me evoke.. ring a bell //
She:
tk ur tym..
Chitaranjan:
okie ….
now i m under pressure
hmm…….. real pressure J..
She:
:D
our true self comes out wen v wrk under pressure ;-)..
Chitaranjan:
hmmm..
ur story was more genuine..
reflecting ur natural behavior..
She:
hmmm..
Chitaranjan:
let me share something in the similar line
tht reflects me …
She:
i believe everyone has some natural behavior..
yea, its jst that I hv some impressions about u…
rest will b made wen u tel me abt urself J
Chitaranjan:
ok J
She:
yes
u can proceed J..
Chitaranjan:
ok let me tell u a very recent incident..
She:
Yes
Chitaranjan:
a story of yesterday
don’t knw u wld like ths or not
anyways ...
i was having a bad day yesterday..
She:
i like anything/everything :P
remember always J..
Chitaranjan:
ok baba.. J
so wht I was saying..
yes - a very bad day..
was very upset
went to a coffee shop..
She:
so wat bad waise?
Chitaranjan:
shall tell u later ..let me complete the story
She:
ok..
Chitaranjan:
ok
i ordered a sandwich & a cup of coffee
She:
k..
Chitaranjan:
a girl back in the counter..
was making sandwich..
She:
k..
Chitaranjan:
somehow I felt like..
she was also looked very down..clumsy .. like me
She:
ok
Chitaranjan:
u knw mayonaise ?..
She:
ya..
Chitaranjan:
it was spilling over..
She:
ok..
Chitaranjan:
i cld understand her state of mind
She:
ok..
Chitaranjan:
cldn't stop myself
with lot of guts went to her
& said 'we all hv days like ths ..its ok'
she looked at me..
She:
k..
Chitaranjan:
thn I said u knw - “u’ve got a FACE for smile”..
hmmm... thn she smiled J
She:
so sweet..
Chitaranjan:
and thn i also smiled..
She:
lovely..
Chitaranjan:
she reciprocated with ‘hey young man ! u also hv got a good smile'
She:
then?..
Chitaranjan:
i said “tnx .. tomorrow it will be a better one J
She:
tht was gr8 dialog..
Chitaranjan:
J yes i knw..
thn i could see an expression in her face tht was willing to describe something..
it was indeed worth noticing..
She:
and a moment worth cherishing..
Chitaranjan:
yes - now she opened up and passed a better smile J
Chitaranjan:
i waited for few minutes
she served me sandwich and while handing over to me
she said “tnx .. it was indeed needed..”
She:
how sweet..
Chitaranjan:
thn i left tht place - not sure if i'll get a chance to go thr
even if i go - not sure if i can meet her again..
She:
hmmm
ths happens..
Chitaranjan:
even if i meet her - not sure she will recognize me..
She:
hmm..
Chitaranjan:
but YES I realized that we get distracted easily by others ..also fact is, sometimes in order to heal urself u need to reach out to someone else..."
ths is how I can summarize ths story
ths is wht i hv posted today in my FB ..not sure how many could relate to ths J

and the chat continued…

8 comments:

Naveed Khan said...

creative writing ...interesting

__cB said...

woh to hai :-)
new way of story writting !

Anupama said...

Amazing way of writting. U rock man !

Debashish said...

What an IDEA ;-)

Fresh feeling.

Anonymous said...

Chit bhai really good one

shaveta said...

Interesting..Seems like a real one..nicely written.

Anonymous said...

Nice one.. btw who is she ??

__cB said...

UR name pls :-)